Life So Precise - 01 Comments
This evening I was born,
In a dirty drain
of a cosmopolitan city
where glamour and glory
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The way you have described the mosquito from its birth to death is so very arresting! Through out the poem you are able to maintain a kind of eerie beauty around the short life span of this tiny fly! The poem concludes with a jolting end....'but unlike you/ never die every moment/ we live'....Top marks
Thank you revered Madam for the beautiful remarks rendered, thanks for the insightful and highly inspiring words. Subhas
but unlike you, never die every moment we live. still to learn from a minute dirty creature well written.
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7/18/2025 7:51:14 PM # 1.0.0
A fantastic expression has been made on mosquito from its birth to death. The inscription of its work and life style is stunning. Its life span is too short as it may be cited...... Life for us is so short and so precise, yet we love to live and fly up and high, A beautiful poem amazingly shared.10
Thanks my revered Sir for the gracious visit and these great words of encouragement.