Monday, October 10, 2005

Life So Brief Comments

Rating: 4.2

Under the debris, I hear a boy crying.
Under the mud, I hear a mother screaming.
Under water, I see a father struggling.
Under grief, I hear a girl lamenting.
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Christian Eliab Ratnam
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Duncan Wyllie 28 April 2006

Lets all try our best to do our best for the best in the moment, a great style and meaning contained from a tallented writer, Love Duncan

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Ivy Christou 10 October 2005

what you describe here it is so true.. unfortunately life is short and we must make the most of it! great write HBH

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