Saturday, August 29, 2020

Life Says - No Respite Comments

Rating: 4.9

When life is playing it's tricks
Then what is the use to carry a stick
The ways are long and mystic
O-Yo what is fuss with stones and bricks
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Poetic Sky
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Michael Jack 12 September 2020

Life is cruel to some and crazy for some people.

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Chinedu Dike 11 September 2020

A profound philosophical reflection in verse with rhythmic splendour. A work of an intricate mind — great expression.

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Varsha M 29 August 2020

Beautiful expression of tiredness and failing strength but hold done yet many good things have to happen. Good poetry. Thank-you for sharing. Admirations.

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Varsha M 29 August 2020

Respite on board looks cruel But on long run proves integral Preparing for another hour Which is tougher than one on rear. An attitude to challenge the respite Gives courage to fight Be it good or bad I made my mind. In the meantime how time fly Would never be our concern primary But when it's done right We come like gold brilliant Nothing is unworthy Only journey seems clumsy As it fades away One feels I made it any way

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