Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Life's Undulations Comments

Rating: 5.0

The undulations of life find me sitting here,
Like hills in the peaks, rolling on until the end.
For now I'm alone, sad and full of un-cheer,
But, a light, my thoughts offer to lend
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Daniel Bates
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R B Seals 23 July 2016

Daniel, a beautiful work I could easily immerse myself in right from the start. Words and phases I could immediately wear on my heart, my soul bathing in its torment. Thank you, Daniel, for a grand effort!

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