Saturday, April 25, 2009

Life's Twist Comments

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time fast approaching,
it dawn on me suddenly,
the pendulum of reality,
swinging into the inevitability,
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gina layog
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 April 2009

My life that only thing that is consistent, sacrificial pyre, that proves the twist, the asylum, I seek to be off the living list.....................Poignant Lines.........

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

life is really exciting is it not? beautiful words..nice sequence amazing poem!

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Barry A. Lanier 25 April 2009

I love the finality.....'seeking to be off the living list', , , , , now that's as Larry would say...if you don' think that's good sumpin' is wrong with ya, , , , , ,

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