Sunday, May 31, 2009

Life's Sweet Embrace Comments

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I'm surrounded in flowers as I lay in a coma
Embraced like a halo by their sweet aroma
Whilst the sun slowly rises to illuminate the sky
Streaks of the sunlight visible from my third eye
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Yassar Ali
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Ashley Stone 31 May 2009

I love this poem. You did a great job. Even inspired me, now i'm thinking about a new write. Keep up the good work, oh and thanks for your comment.

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Rosalita Fernandez 31 May 2009

Wow, beautifully writen well done, very honest and deep

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life's to short to not be with the one you love 31 May 2009

i like this it is well wrote

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Yassar Ali

Yassar Ali

Ultimate Safe Haven, Halifax UK
Yassar Ali
Yassar Ali
Ultimate Safe Haven, Halifax UK
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