Life's Simple Treasures Comments

Hi Mary, I tried to read this last night, but the first lines hurt so much, so I've come back to it today. It is a perfect expression of those little things that make loving such a wonderful expression of the human heart, and well worth trusting, in order to achieve. Well done and 10 from Tai, hold on to those moments.

I can't say it as well as Charles but what a lovely treat! ! ! Family life! ! !

This is a very intimate piece Mary which adds a depth to it. On the face the four line stanza form gives the impression of something simple, yet read through again and the intamacy of the piece takes on a familiarity for the reader. Wonderful piece!

what a blessing love keeping you safe within its mighty walls and the words so lovely this poem's a real treat