Life's Satire Comments

that's a marvelous double satire - the poem as satire and life itself as satire! There are so many great moments too in the poem. Absolutely love this poem!

Wow! ........The title itself grasps the attention of a poet to read this poem and very rightly so it is a wonderful poem......... It's a real mockery of life mentioned in this poem Tara......We in actual sense live for others and never taste the original flavour of life........we in reality keep on working, collecting things that we wont be able to take away from this world at the end of the day but we keep on struggling all the time........This poem has a real thought provoking idealogy that one should spend time on him or herself too regardless of the essentials of life or other planetary desires you have described in these verses..........very astonishing work Tara.......absolute 10......Regards