Sunday, September 6, 2009

Life's Run Comments

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She likes the sadness,
Life has let her down,
Prefers to smiles
The furrows of a frown.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2010

When she raises up her face To enjoy the sun, Farming still in trace, She feels the freeness In life's run................it is life's enjoyable fruit with all the happiness.. nice poem sir.....10 read mine sixth ton... new start

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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 September 2009

The life's long run is well composed in a few words.

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Tamara - Hanaring 13 September 2009

a lovely lively poem, .enjoyed it, so well said

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