Friday, September 11, 2009

Life’s Riddles Comments

Rating: 5.0

Childhood enrolled fun and play
With a demand all was done
Neglect and habits had no say
When playing was all in one
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Chitra - 03 February 2010

a hard core write on the realities of existence, the tumultuous twists and turns of life well depicted in these terse verses.

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Sangeeta Daya 17 September 2009

Namaste Bapujee. An excellent poem about how bitter-sweet life turns out to be!

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Surya . 11 September 2009

nice and good ideas woven as a good poem. voted10 surya

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