Life's Rhythm! Comments

Learning continues till death. Life is a journey.10 NR

still I promise that I never felt any storm in extreme, as I never cause any harm even in my dream! - - -VERY NICE LINES

wonderful poem as the title shows. i loved to read your poem, dear sir!

Siddartha, , such a wonderful poem.....................

I did like it dear SM. Simple yet meaningful.. Flow and the thoughts have matched the pace..

Life is an ongoing learning process. Thanks for sharing. Warm regards, Bipasha

It is an amazing piece, crafted with the rhythmic detour of life's uncertainties and possibilities. Simple language, rich in style, and apt within context.

Your spirit to learn still in life is commendable!

beautiful! I feel as though I can connect to the same feelings in this poem.

as I never cause any harm even in my dream..love it.

Rightly said, we have to learn a lot from our advancing age

A lovely poem on and honest for it shows that life is a challenge, but you have accepted to live and deal with each and every one of those it brings your way. I am pleased by the fact that you are teaching us not to complain. Thanks for writing these two lined thoughts. I found it easier to read it because each stanza takes care of my questions.

the struggle of adjusting. really great poem.

The struggle of adjusting, then results to greater learning, Truly touching poem that reflects about life and challenges.

We all have to learn Beautifully written

For, I just watch the life and learn Unlike many others may fetch it in whole and turn in! These lines touched my veins at first....indeed I feel like the same many a Times....that if i am not gonna face that extreme storm, how I am going to learn just as a spectator of others' life problems.....beautifully penned thanks for sharing your pen...

still I promise that I never felt any storm in extreme, as I never cause any harm even in my dream! great work siddartha......... your thoughts have a essence of your name siddhartha (buddha) love the ending indeed

I don't just like your poems Montik. I really love them.

Seems like I am in a brisk pace of risk! not sure anytime I liked challenges, for all my honest longings! like I know not myself to put, may be hardly have any clue of life yet! surely so open for the life always, never was with such surprising eyes! looks like it is an eternal search, as I never wanted to make a breach! - - - - - - - - - - - - A beautiful verse- - - - - -In spite of doubts, there is high spirit to meet life's challenges of life.

To learn. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.