Thursday, October 22, 2015

Life’s Recipe Comments

Rating: 5.0

You cut my thoughts into pieces,
Wash my dreams like dishes,
Mince ideas with wishes
Test my patience with persistence…
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 22 December 2015

I will try this recipe......Thanks Man.

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Liza Sudina 11 November 2015

I like the way you serve me with menu - good that you are pleased with this crucial process!

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T Rajan Evol 24 October 2015

I must try it once, seems tasteful, you write differently Asim,10 for it.

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Loke Kok Yee 23 October 2015

whatever the recipe it must end with a last supper Thanks Asim-10++

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Sanjukta Nag 23 October 2015

Rereading Life's Recipe and enriched again. Wonderful

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Valsa George 23 October 2015

I am sure the 'she' referred here is Life! Life gives us opportunities, makes us slog for revenue, gives us dreams, makes us ponder over the Power beyond us, gives us moments of disappointments as well as jubilation! Yes, life serves us mixed dishes. A great write touching upon every aspect of human life!

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Rajnish Manga 23 October 2015

I have been swept away to the seventh sky of great bliss after reading the poem. This lyrical poem has a music and melody that is soothing to the heart. I like the entire poem. A quote: It takes courage and determination To acknowledge power of omnipotent

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