You cut my thoughts into pieces,
Wash my dreams like dishes,
Mince ideas with wishes
Test my patience with persistence…
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I like the way you serve me with menu - good that you are pleased with this crucial process!
I must try it once, seems tasteful, you write differently Asim,10 for it.
whatever the recipe it must end with a last supper Thanks Asim-10++
I am sure the 'she' referred here is Life! Life gives us opportunities, makes us slog for revenue, gives us dreams, makes us ponder over the Power beyond us, gives us moments of disappointments as well as jubilation! Yes, life serves us mixed dishes. A great write touching upon every aspect of human life!
I have been swept away to the seventh sky of great bliss after reading the poem. This lyrical poem has a music and melody that is soothing to the heart. I like the entire poem. A quote: It takes courage and determination To acknowledge power of omnipotent
I will try this recipe......Thanks Man.