I am walking alone in the lonely rain
to hide my heart full of sorrows and pain
though no one can trace my tears in rain
I still use my hands to wipe it while crossing the vane
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wonderful and realy great exprissions i like the most in your writing 10 ++++++++ Layla
Pains may be many... But way out are so many When a rain could hide your tears There will be a lightening To show you the way out. Lets not worry about Life's Pains Its part and parcel of life Lets learn from those pains The value of our Mothers Womb.
gee! your pain is deeply felt, feel your need of lonliness Sebastine, excellently written keep it up. tc
mMmmMmmM.. this poem sounds very sad to me lol, , buh i luv sad poems so yeh i luv urz too, , lol 10+