Sunday, August 7, 2011

Life' S Not All A Bed Of Roses! Comments

Rating: 2.9

''When loneliness becomes your forbidden partner,
and Trouble knocks and shoots up at the door,
of a heart about to crush and wither,
with sorrows built up over and more.
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Rosmin Elsa Mohan
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Valsa George 24 June 2014

A very inspiring write, letting in the comforting breeze of hope to pat our smouldering souls! So do not despise your luck, or curse your fate. thinking perhaps, ' It's been too late! ', But never so late, if you get up and run. For the day 's still crisp and the night 's still Young! A beautiful conclusion!

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Kee Thampi 10 January 2012

Life teaches more to study Then everything you do turns into shambles, with the ones you trust snubbing at face, When you feel being snuffed out like a candle, In the milieu of life's long pathways.

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Gordon Tseng 15 December 2011

Oh, sure! Life's not all a bed of Roses. It's a bed of Verses! Enjoy my poem 'So-called Success', my young friend.

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Vipins Puthooran 04 December 2011

'Tis a very g'd poem, , , I'll give thee 10++

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Minu Alex 15 November 2011

'For the day 's still crisp and the night 's still Young'..nice lines...may your hopes be alive and young!

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan

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