Life's Mystery. Comments

Ah! it was those last two lines which made this fine write quite an outstanding poem, Fay. The poem itself was fine and well written but when I read those final lines, it was as if a door opened and I saw the entire poem in a different light. The whole poem took on a far deeper meaning because of those two lines. Carl.

Woderful piece of vers Fay did you write it in the bath love Chris top marks lady

Hi Fay. Life often seems a mystery to me but you have a way of putting things into perspective with your clever observations. Regards Dave T.