Friday, December 2, 2016

Life's Moving Vessel Comments

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Inside me lives this hunger it became my rising thunder
I've once heard that our days indeed are numbered
And if that's the case there's no time to waste before
I fall into a deep sleep hibernating slumber
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Laquory Jones
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Roseann Shawiak 09 December 2016

A very intense poem with great pain and suffering contained therein. I have heard your plea and pray for you, don't listen to what others say, you know what needs to be done, stay steadfast in your beliefs and convictions, you will prevail more than anyone will expect. Keep writing, you are a very powerful writer with much to convey. Take care and never give up! Always I have said to others, it's none of my business what others think of me, it's what I think of myself that matters. Stay strong and focused you will do great things! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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