Sunday, June 28, 2009

Life's Little Precious Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

Things may change in just a flash,
so live the life on day-to-day
Endure everyday with passion,
as if it's the last turn of your way
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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Seema Chowdhury 13 July 2009

excellent work! ! ! very nice and positive.

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Surya . 07 July 2009

follow small rules and live life king size.very good.this para says it all'Life is like a hilly river, from sinking banks to vanishing currents Keep your feet firmly on ground, ' voted10 surya

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C. P. Sharma 30 June 2009

A blissful poem. It flows as the Ganges from the heavens. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 30 June 2009

'Dream big but appreciate smaller things, make no regrets and harsh comments'... Great words, Deepen...good poem yours...motivational...i liked...thanks...10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 June 2009

Life is like water.......................so precious! ! !

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Priya Arora 28 June 2009

Hi! My all appreciations for this lovely realistic write..well i do have the same opinion about life..You make your readers feel that they are reading all the more there own point of view..It's a big achievement in it self..All the best :) ..Keep on Sharing such beautiful thoughts..if you can spare some time then do read my collection of poems..hope you'll like that. Thanks 'd Regards, Priya

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Lee Crowell 28 June 2009

the message here is universal and well stated by you Deependra

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Seema Aarella 28 June 2009

An inspiring write....a piece of log for the sinking soul, to keep it afloat....! ! ! ! I liked the last stanza more....very meaningful! ! !

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