Saturday, November 21, 2015

Life's Lemons Comments

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Life you gave me lemons.
It was sour not sweet.
Made my mouth pucker up.
I looked liked a duck
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Austin Warwick
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Htetmyet Ne' Ye' 22 November 2015

The last 2 lines, But I need lemons To make my lemonade., was amazing. Thank you for the great poem!

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 21 November 2015

In small life thoughts a beautiful poem woven.

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Austin Warwick

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