Life's Journey Haiku Poem by Shaun Cronick

Life's Journey Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Life's Journey.
Travels forward.
Never back.

Sunday, August 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: experimental,japan
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Curiosity...5-7-5...Our English concept of syllables doesn't exist in the same way in Japanese. Interesting.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 18 August 2019

yes true..... we travel forward.. short and sweet. tony

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Shaun Cronick 28 March 2020

Thank you Tony for your kind and welcome comment. Take care good sir.

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Jane Campion 18 August 2019

Excellent. Life' s journey goes forward always with only one exit.

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Shaun Cronick 18 August 2019

Thank you Jane for your generous and uplifting comment. To be honest my first real attempt at Haiku. And in one week I will have two weeks holiday time away from the museum where I work to go through all your poems and all the other kind people on this site and reply to all your comments left for me. Your comments help and make me raise my writing game. I thank you again

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