Friday, December 17, 2004

Life's Highest Goal Comments

Rating: 4.6

Men and women devote their lives
Seeking and searching for gold
Clamoring they must prepare for
The time when they are old.
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Joseph T. Renaldi
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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 December 2004

This poem is a bit too preachy. It is better to speak metaphorically and allow the reader to arrive at conclusions than to spoon feed them categorical elements.

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Joseph T. Renaldi

Joseph T. Renaldi

Frackville, Pennsylvania
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