Thursday, December 28, 2006

... Life's Grander Scheme Of Things... Comments

Rating: 3.1

I feel like I'm a feather dancing in the air
My tresses flow behind me as if they have no care
I free-fall through the centuries, the aged times of old
I tremble with the breezes breath I fancy feeling bold
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Linda Ori 03 January 2007

This is peaceful and serene, just like the floating feather you describe. If we could all live our lives so carefree and happily, what more could you ask for? Your writing has a beautiful message for us all. Lovely! Linda

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Geoff Warden 28 December 2006

Truly did enjoy this read Kristin....Well written

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Patricia Gale 28 December 2006

Wonderful piece, flowed so well and a fable indeed!

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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