As life You stay
In my body
You keep me moving
With great excitement.
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You have very candidly expressed that use of jargons is not your forte but I love your poetry because you write simple, clean and clear-cut ways.
your creation is filled with all the love....value laden piece/prayer
A nice prayer indeed. Deserved to be poem of the day. Thanks for sharing.Loved it.
This is a beautiful poem. Top score