Life's Fret And Fever Comments

Of life and poetic escapades into dreamland perhaps n fantasies. Superb freeverse style muse here. And in the end whisked into reality of earthly toil n work. Wow. Fantastic! ! Kudos. Pls do leave your thoughts comment on my latest poem too, titled, 'To stand tall and proud yet to humbly bow'

A well-crafted poem. We all have our moments of escape from the reality and specially we poets need such moments for inspiration. Here you speak for all poetic souls but even we poets know that we cant stay in our imaginary world always so we hear the call of reality n respond to it. A beautiful write. This fret n fever takes its toll. That's what life is all about. A10.

Dream world is quite different from mundane world. In our mundane world we go through the real events. We have to undergo here with inescapable fret and fever. It may be quoted your last stanza.... And I come back to my world Trembling with unknown fear And heavenly voice says in a whisper That here everyone has to undergo Its ineluctable fret and fever.