Life's Experience's May Be Easily Drawn Upon. Comments

Love this poem. These lines are great, 'T'was happend aft' life's errors. Can only be drawn... Upon and To be erased... By light's early dawn. They resonate especially deeply with me becaue my birth name is Dawn. Keep up the great work, and by the way, nice to see someone from good ole Chicago! Love that city. Had family there and the most special of memories. Cheers!

SIR MICHAEL JEFFREY OF THE MISSING HUNTERS......VERY NICE WORK GOOD SIR...PRAYTELL, WHERE HAS THOU BEEN? HOPE ALL IS WELL...BEAM ME UP AS SOON AS YOU CAN''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

This verse... is a fine one. No blank spaces in you MIchael! And yes, point well (very well) made... tomorrow is another day.