Saturday, January 28, 2012

Life's Dream... Comments

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Yesterday I wanted to write you a sweet sonnet,
But my mind grew blank and my hands grew idle,
Whilst I slept I dreamt for you an epic love story,
Yet my fingers were too dreamy to type these words,
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Cosmic Dreamer
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Deep Mukherjee 31 January 2012

this poem has a beautiful flow about it; such touching words too! ! !

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Silentpoet Grl 29 January 2012

Gorgeous poem- I also love the last two lines... the way your words move and the emotion in them - your talent always amazes me!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 January 2012

Wow! Cosmic, this poem is beautiful...the wording, the rhythm and the flow is superb..... So i curled up in my blanket of loneliness and dreamed on, shall you perhaps meet me there, so we can dance? ...

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