Saturday, April 26, 2014

Life's Cycle Comments

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Don’t cry when I am gone
I will be ok
Just as I was on my first day at school
It was ok
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C. Albert Andrews
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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2014

Thanks for inviting me to your poem. I wished you had made a comment or two on my poems before inviting me to do the same. However, I enjoyed your poem and so I write. I had similar thoughts on life's cycle when I saw a crow build a nest. You may read my poem 'Thoughts Spun Around A Nest'. 'My little ones will grow up too Then I’ll be just like you I will have to let go.' - Yes, this is life's cycle! Best wishes, and happy writing!

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Wang Qian 03 May 2014

Nice poem! I can simply relate to the feeling inside.

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