Life's Contrast Comments

Life's contrast is a reality everyone knows; but the way you portrayed it in 8 simple looking lines is truly amazing... Loved it... Regards, Kamran

thanks for sharing this wonderful words of poetry. well done my friend.

An excellent poem Shiraz! A delight to read indeed! ! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

What a nice angelic theme in a very short piece! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Angels always touch our hearts to be in a moment of peace and be in a bliss...a 10.

Sometimes we need to make a clean break and start again, wise words as always, 10 Lynda xx

thats nice have a clean break and start again ++++10 as always regards anjali

struggle is the main in life. well expressed............10+

well thought and well penned!

Still struggling to adjust, , , , , , , persian, , , thanx for sharing, a 10

This is a pondered look on life that is expressed here. Despite of pain, the 'clean' consideration of the best way to follow is the wisest advice to follow... Contrast between pain/past and a clear future is very well built here.10!