Wednesday, February 13, 2019

Life's Continuing Story Part 5 Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's like I can almost feel you
It's like you're here with me
But in reality
You're many miles away
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Ray Hansell
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 13 February 2019

Interesting poem on nagging daydreams, you conveyed it with subtlety and youthful perception. I can relate to it, recalling how I felt in my high school years when I used to daydream of Paul McCartney.

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