Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Life's Challenges Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world oh so bright in my eyes
Now seems to be so grey

I'm still not sure
What turn of events
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Alla Simone 20 November 2012

imagery*...b/c deleting and reposting may result in multiple posts.

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Alla Simone 20 November 2012

Amusing isn't it? How one moment you could be flying sky high Then the next moment You're on your face on the ground Excellent imager throughout mingles well with an underlying bitterness, until optimism & a feeling of control resurfaces. Another line I especially enjoyed was That one or two happy moments In this life is all some are spared Great work, keep it up!

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