Life's Call Comments

Fate had put its noose on, Dragged my mother up above among the angels - As if light escaped me - And pushed me onto the path of dreams. Beautiful writings on a life after death. tony

" I am young, but old in misery, Motherless and fatherless, a sister merely a dream, And now I'm singing to my youth: " You are fantastic....

A refined poetic imagination, Walter W. Safar. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

The mind and the body are always traveling in different routes but a thin line of compromise, the obedience is mature and old and rebellion is young and foolish, this is like a vision/dream from young to old or the opposite, great poetry thanks for sharing WW. Safar.

I am young, but old in misery, Motherless and fatherless, a sister merely a dream, And now I'm singing to my youth: „I am lighting a glow on the path of dreams - Not like a mighty night guard, But like a humble playful firefly - To cast light on many a path. Young dreamer, follow this traveller's song To your home - Where love is a welcome guest To give its life and warmth to everyone... ....it wins my heart.....

o wide hand it's a big cell from the one cell it begets crore cells it's a love it's life travels port to port route to route father to mother husband to wife soul to soul as living cosmic gene.........../// beautiful poem

Dear child, you shall leave your arbour early, To adorn the world like a bird" While my mother moistened my face with tears, I saw the sun rising, ....i am lighting a glow on my paths of dreams.. again and again your poetic soul sings beautiful songs dear poet. tony

This is similar to my poem MOMS SMILES Did u read it as yet Kindly ur a loverly poetry WWS