Thursday, May 30, 2013

Life's Beauty Is Lost Comments

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The Colour of my skin, is just a colour
The Religion I believe, Is only My belief
The money that I have, Is at my own cost
The freedom I am given is not always my choice
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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2018

The beauty of life is not understood The importance of living is more than the speed of life Nothing is natural Beauty is lost Words no longer meaningful What we want What we truly need Is just the Beauty of Living.........impressive expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared.10

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Jak Black 28 June 2015

The importance of living is more than the speed of life................. this one line alone says it all. I admire your fundamental principles, and your ability to put them in to words. Another great poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2014

Beautiful poem from your pen. This poem reflects in many angles. Many things may not be our choice. Yet, there may be something of our choice, or in other way we have to make some choice to make our life beautiful.....Very true said in few lines.... What we want What we truly need Is just the Beauty of Living Loved the way you presented it.

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Sandra Feldman 13 July 2013

The Beauty of Living Enjoying each day The Beauty of Giving Makes it that way. May I be so bold as to assume that this was your beautiful message? The beauty of Poetry, says so much, in so few words and in such a beautiful way. In conclusion, you wrote a beautiful poem

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Heather Wilkins 07 July 2013

what we truly need is just the beauty of living. nice

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Ramesh Rai 07 July 2013

What we truly need Is just the Beauty of Living beautiful write. love your write

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Danny Draper 05 July 2013

This is not true as this poem of beautiful and lasting content perfectly belies and the gradual accretion of beautiful poems on this site and in the world. The great point of this poem is that so much is personal choice and in itself beauty is very much founded in personal perceptions, emotions, circumstances and experiences. Well written.

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Mark Dillon 12 June 2013

Well written as ever Lyn, I think we only truly see and appreciate the simpler things in life as we get older and take the time to stop a while and really look at and appreciate what we have been blessed with and the beauty of nature that surrounds us and not the things we don't have.

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Unwritten Soul 11 June 2013

Never forget about a thing, being thankful..and look that what we received as something, and we will see that how lucky we are, and life even look beautiful than ever when we have that insight! _Soul

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Neela Nath Das 08 June 2013

Art of Living makes us take our life beautiful.Very profound Lyn.Nothing is more important than life.Drink life to the lees.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 June 2013

A wonderful poem, LYN, stressing the point - - What we truly need / Is just the Beauty of Living ! THANKS FOR SHARING!

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R.j. Wynn 06 June 2013

Great write! I agree wholeheartedly, Thank God he threw a wrench in my fan so I can now enjoy.

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Sekharan Pookkat 05 June 2013

The beauty of life Is Neither colour nor religion But it is a transaction Of endless meaningful deeds

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Dee Corpolongo 04 June 2013

I loved this poem and agree with your thoughts and conclusion, though sad as they may be.... and this runs deep, though simply said. The beauty of life is not understood, the importance of living is more than the speed of life'....wow...I really love those words there..Great poem, Lyn

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Shahzia Batool 04 June 2013

(The beauty of life is not understood) this line is the essence of your poem...though it is generally felt that such poems are the result of some grey phase of life!

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Valerie Dohren 31 May 2013

Modern living has taken the beauty away. Good one Lyn.

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David Wood 30 May 2013

Amen to that. We can be beautiful in so many ways too.

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