Life's A Mess Comments
I know I need to buy some socks
A mundane thing, oh and cut my locks.
I need to make the unmade bed,
Make a list, clear my head.
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Love this superbly crafted poem. Simply magnificent and wondrous. Andy this just flows and is spellbinding.10+++ and added you and this superb poem to my poet/poem list. It has a Roald Dahl genius woven into it. Simply magical.
dear Andy, this is one of my picks for April's showcase. Thanks. bri :)
P.S. well, actually, Life may not be a mess, but your home certainly is a contender. bri ;)
favorite lines: Fix the fence, mow the lawn, Broken branches need be sawn. & Vacuum cleaner in it lair Seems accusing in itsglare...if course PH has been up to its tricks here. : ( the last couplet gave me a wee chuckle! to MyPoemList. bri :)
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7/20/2025 11:57:53 AM # 1.0.0
A humour piece lace with rhyme and rhythm I enjoyed it immensly. Thanks for sharing. Great write