! ! Life Renewed Comments

It is at peace, content, knowing that each ending has values and emotion. Renewing life in nature's core we feel the broadness of life. Oneness that makes the changes happen is of ours. An excellent poem is nicely penned.10

Another inspirational poem Bob. The cycle of the earth and renewal of life, is so well told, and I appreciate how you place the words, not only with beauty, but with words I can totally understand. 10 love Karin

Beautifully expressed. If only we could live one day at a time, as if that will be the only and last day.

life renewed.......magnificent poem bob! one feels rejuvinated reading such good work.thanks for sharing

nothing dies, it just changes form. cloud, rain, snow flakes- all different forms that manifest according to different conditions. very inspiring Bob. Mamta

flow of birth well incorporated.........and let it be my favourite poem.........

A sweet song of wanderings from birth to birth. How true! there is no death, it is rebirth. CP.

This is truly a wonderful poem, highly inspirational, so much to learn from the divine canopy...the best thearpy for a life that needs a revamp and impetus

Bob, this so profound and true. there is no birth no death, no coming no going, only new manifestation, when the conditions are right. the last stanza is really beautiful. you have through lovely images distilled the essence of life. thanks, enchanted. HAVE A LOVELY DAY Mamta

The magic of change, seasons, renewal, the whole cycle of life in terms that are truly poetic. Thanks, Bob.

You have a wonderful way of looking at things Bob, a well thought out poem, the circle of life told in your own special way, Da Iawn 10 Lynda xx

I sometimes feel amazed that the air we breathe in some ways is the breath of billions of other beings who have come before us. I've never understood those people who want never to die. We enjoy our youth, we live our season and try to make the best of it, and then others are there to carry on. Yes, all things are constantly in renewal and the great wheel of life spins on. Nice poem.

A wonderful poem. Enjoyed it very much.... Best wishes. Keep on writing. U poems r truly marvellous.

With very few poems like this we feel totally comfortable, enjoy reading each word, enjoy absorbing each feeling, enjoy the twists in the composition......so much these great poets give to their readers......thank u Sir Sooo soooo much.

The magnificence of dawn, first light of a brand new day dew drops leave nights flowers, as moisture drifts away humidity it beckons' collectively it seems reflected in a rainbow in clouds and in life's streams yes you instill in me a passion, regards Bob

Bob, this is superb. It's ethereal in its quality and needs to be read a couple of times at least, to be able to capture the message completely....... Top marks, Bob. Love, Fran xxx

compact fine composition................10+

Dear Bob, i wrote a poem I wander lonely as a cloud which somehow soounds something like this too. cheers.

Your cloud as ship beautifully explains the interdependence of all life and leaves the reader with a feeling of acceptance and understanding. Sensitive and ringing with truth, your words come from that place where we are all one. You're right. 'It is our Oneness that makes the changes happen.' Thanks for sharing your wisdom. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

In every cycle of this Universe we see resurging Life...And Nature is the marvelous mirror that reflects this resurgence brilliantly to wise comprehending eyes...this poem comprehends this truth in full...well written and highly inspirational, Bob...10