Friday, October 12, 2012

Life Remains Elusive Comments

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Life's path leads to mountains,
And around the bend,
And into deep valleys—
Never seeming to end.
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Walterrean Salley
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Dave Walker 26 October 2012

Really like it, a fantastic poem. we can only keep going.

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Valsa George 17 October 2012

Yes, life is very elusive and puzzling. This is exactly the thought expressed in one of my poems -' Life '! But my poem is not as rhyming as yours! enjoyed reading!

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Valerie Dohren 15 October 2012

I think happiness is elusive - just when you think you have found it, it slips away! ! Good write.

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Anita Sehgal 12 October 2012

so very beautiful... very insightful

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Walterrean Salley

Walterrean Salley

Savannah, Ga
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