Monday, January 23, 2012

Life Ransacked! Comments

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Half-an-inch away from death..
Lies d sloppy road of life
Thin like thread, oft, brief as a breath
Yet mysterious like d smile of a wife...
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Debasish Mishra
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Rizvana Parveen 23 January 2012

good composition...Half-an-inch away from death But miles afar from Life is life..very philosophical indeed.... A mystery, a puzzle, a problem at large.. Something like d smile of a wife....well a husband could also be the same.....

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Dave Walker 23 January 2012

A great poem, really like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Angel Cries.

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