If thoughts of all beings merged together....
If all bodies dissolved and our spirits flew like a feather....
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Hi Tranquil, A very loving and caring poem. I really love how you write. Excellent write. Take Care.
A lovely poem - very warm and masterfull written, I really enjoyed this, Steve
Splendid thoughts for a peaceful morning read. Lovely write T.O.
And as I read you..... I did remember that awesome poetry which made the world proud.......... Where the mind is without fear and the head is held high; Where knowledge is free; Where the world has not been broken up into fragments by narrow domestic walls; ............... Into that heaven of freedom, my Father, let my country awake.' ...... and I am sure everyone knows who wrote that! ! It was a very good attempt......10 indeed! !
T.O.>>>A Philisophical Gem, my dear...quite an inpressive write, indeed! '''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
I like William would love to join this world, Excisite picture.......
I want to be in this world you so beautifully describe temporarily, but I am too much in love with the five senses to stay there. Still, I love your poem.
with this poem you brought spring in! ! ! ...love...nalini