Monday, September 11, 2006

Life/Philosophy Comments

Rating: 5.0

If thoughts of all beings merged together....
If all bodies dissolved and our spirits flew like a feather....
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
COMMENTS
Nalini Hebbar 12 September 2006

with this poem you brought spring in! ! ! ...love...nalini

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Ruby Root 12 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, A very loving and caring poem. I really love how you write. Excellent write. Take Care.

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Steve Hagget 12 September 2006

A lovely poem - very warm and masterfull written, I really enjoyed this, Steve

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Patricia Gale 12 September 2006

Splendid thoughts for a peaceful morning read. Lovely write T.O.

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David Darbyshire 12 September 2006

Nice poem Tranquil, dave xxx

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Catastrophe King 12 September 2006

And as I read you..... I did remember that awesome poetry which made the world proud.......... Where the mind is without fear and the head is held high; Where knowledge is free; Where the world has not been broken up into fragments by narrow domestic walls; ............... Into that heaven of freedom, my Father, let my country awake.' ...... and I am sure everyone knows who wrote that! ! It was a very good attempt......10 indeed! !

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 September 2006

T.O.>>>A Philisophical Gem, my dear...quite an inpressive write, indeed! '''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Geoff Warden 11 September 2006

I like William would love to join this world, Excisite picture.......

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William Jackson 11 September 2006

I want to be in this world you so beautifully describe temporarily, but I am too much in love with the five senses to stay there. Still, I love your poem.

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