Life ~ Passing - Tanka Comments

Great picture of life, solid one.

Top marks to this poem

Aging is a slow cold farewell to life, isn't iit?

Such a beautiful image that slow drip

Superb Tanka...Isn't this life is like this frozen ice on the leaves, falling drop by drop as the slipping of our age leaving everything behind.

DJ liked the metaphor.

I agree, our life is melting slowly and gradually.

Marvellous poem, high on philosophical notes.

How true this is. Bravo!

Actually yes, it is. Excellent poem