Saturday, November 8, 2008

Life Passes So Fast Comments

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Baby girl rests in the crib,
Now she’s got a dirty bib,
Little nightgown with slippers of blue,
And now she wares a school dress too.
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You are a truly great poet. Great rythmn and you have an amazing gift. Great Job!

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Alyssa Marquardt 11 November 2008

wow, its amazing and scary but true how fast life does pass. your poem is a really awesome look at it all. It was enjoyable how you put all that meaning of life and everything into a reallly long poem with well written rhymes. Very creative write.

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