Life Owes Me An Apology Comments

The deepest and saddest peom I have ever read. Amazing! ! !

'Life has mocked me Took pleasure in my misery A cruel joke I want justice Or at least an apology From life' - A very strong statement. Loved your poem. Heartiest congratulations on the poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

For the deceit For the illusion that I lived For the maya I believed was true And yet void /// your word " maya" builds a path everywhere where every raw minded people falls in a trap; it's delusional fact of life; every unknown to the self thinks that s/he is right in own planning of life but in the midway finds nothing without great deception; yes; your poem narrates this theme is very stupendously; congrats for being selected this poem as POD....and from me 5*****

We don't always get what we want from life!

A concise and compelling composition...

Powerful and real. I can feel the disappointment. in time we do realise the reasoning for the heartache. I have lost count of the hurdles I have jumped. You shall too. Thank You

In search of justice! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

For the illusion that I lived For the maya I believed was true And yet void Strolling in the dark A mere deception Life has mocked me no not at all you have not yet read MOMS SMILES DO SO U'LL LOVE LIFE

Life owes me an apology, & sometimes it does, does a memory fade in black & blue.....

Life has mocked me Took pleasure in my misery A cruel joke

If " Life" itself is responsible for your misery, unfortunately I can't see you getting that apology. We all have to be responsible in some way for the choices we make in life. They don't always work out for the best but then we move on and try again and try not to make the same mistakes in our judgement. Your life is in your hands. Improvements are made by personal choices. A wonderful poem, I wish you all the very best and congratulations on Poem Of The Day

Nice poem. " Do you not know what the silence demonstrates" . You have a futile wait. What a beautiful way to mourn about life. Good one.

In the pink of life you think it stinks. Go to a cliff and take a leap. On the way down you will wish that you weren't such a clown. Splat! That's that!

A well crafted poem of the day...... Truly superb and noble...5 stars *****