Saturday, May 28, 2016

Life Or Death Comments

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As the phone rang
His head was throbbing
Heart palpitating
Beads of perspiration rolled
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Kelly Kurt 28 May 2016

A year's work on the line can be heart stopping

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for a whole day my brother was on edge, He got a call from his Prof in college saying he could not find my brother's final exam which counted for 75% of his grade. He was freaking out!

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Gil Highlander 28 May 2016

The suspense was intense, A Grisham style poem.

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Stephen Park 28 May 2016

You had my heart in my mouth till the end and then i fell off the chair laughing! very clever.

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