Life Or Death Comments

Excellent Shikha. All the best!

for sure the light will destroy the darkness and demons..and For sure again, the life is the correct choose. death will come a day. keep the life! a Perfect and nice writing that is called: a terrific work of art!

great theme articulated well. Try reading mine. S.P.

sensitive topic easily handled..well written, keep penning

A very good poem. May God give you the wisdom, courage and strength to change the mindset of males of the Indian society. Thanks for sharing

I really loved the starting it's beautiful..A request to shorten ur sentences...A beautiful write......on a very crucial topic justice done

I am counting up my demons.. Demons, that cursed my entire life.. And yet, I possess nothing but these demons.. Demons, that formed the basic axis of my life! such multiple use of demons makes it powerful and reverberating nice

could never find my mistakes, Nor the reason for never ending atrocities on my body and mind, May be its all related to the deeds of my previous life. Iniquitous sins that still haunt this wretched life! brilliant write. keep itup

And soon I turned to be burden on their lives..Although at every step, I proved I am fine! They always hoped for someone to be next in line A son who can carry on the bloodline, And soon I turned to be burden on their lives.. lovely line i admire. but curse on indian society... pathetic feeling... great poem...10

Shikha, a good theme it is! A note of pessimism is there. Thru your poem the message you want to give is apt.Thanks for sharing this superb piece.Well, you may read my poem-We, The Present Women..

Shikha, a good theme it is! A note of pessimism is there.Thru your poem the message you want to give is apt.Thanks for sharing this superb piece.Well, you may read my poem-We, The Women..

Hi Shikha! Thanks for sharing this poem...female infanticide is an evil that must be eradicated completely from our society...I hope this poem is not autobiographical...if it is, I hope and pray that God gives you the strength to fight through it all...