Saturday, January 19, 2013

Life On Rail Comments

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Dear, I fear of sin; I sense,
Open mouth in real repentance
By word or deed, if hurt you, please
Pardon by name of the Lord to ease.
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Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam
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Valsa George 25 February 2013

'Repentance vents pent up tension Pardon softens the hearts' friction'...... very meaningful lines! .

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 January 2013

This is a nice rhythmic and rhyming poem.Loved it THANKS.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 22 January 2013

Beautiful lines; enjoyed reading the poem.

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