Life On Earth's Heavens Comments

A thrilling landscape has been presented in the poem which brings to us the magic and the pristine beauty of Kashmir valley which has often been described as the Firdaus (Heaven) on earth. To cap it all, you have have done garnishing with different seasons. Thanks, Asim ji. Look at the scintillating scene- Some peaks have snow / Like a bride, covering the head

Mother Nature! To respect and protect the earth. Nice work.

My friend, Ayman had sent pictures of the valley in Kashmir where he lives, and it was the most beautiful sight. Your poem does the scenic place justice. A 10

Beauty of summer nicely described, wonderful poem.