Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Life On An Island Comments

Rating: 5.0

Driving on the streets of island
I take in the flavors of life in middle- east
Buildings are carved with eye appealing geometric patterns
The turquoise window glass and sea water shimmer together against bright sun
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Savita Tyagi
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Akhtar Jawad 15 September 2014

A beautiful description of feelings on an Arabian Island, nights in desert are really beautiful.

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V P Mahur 27 March 2014

Dear Madam, Thanks for your comment. Nicely and elaborately described thought you you have in this poem. Thanks!

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Kanav Justa 23 March 2014

, , a poet can make even the minute observation and then pen down in his/her poem, , , this is exactly what you have done, , , great narration, , ,

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Valsa George 18 March 2014

Your observing eye and active imagination have captured the day and night of life in a Middle East island and you have encapsulated it into a beautiful poem enabling those who have been to the Gulf countries to re capture the scenes and also give a taste of its topography and life for those who have never been to the Gulf! ! Enjoyed much! ! I invite you to read my poem- The Faceless City

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 March 2014

The full moon rises just above the neighbor’s roof Life on a middle-east island is beautifully described. Nice poem with quote of a very appropriate gazal. Thank you.

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