Life Oh! Life Comments
Life oh! Life
It is full of mysteries
The Good and The Bad
It is sweet but
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A commendable slice of prosaic verse, young lady......If you don't mind an ounce of constructive suggestion, watch your choice of punctuation...The employment of effective punctuation is so much more paramount when writing in a prosaic style as opposed to contemporary free-verse whose break-points are easily defined by stanzaic structure. In prose, it's like reading a book...The reader must know when you want them to pause, and be able to identify the end of a thought.Prose is not as easy as it may appear! t In your above work, there are breakpoints which are not recognized by IE: comma, colon, ellipsis or ellision. That said...keep that pen pumping..I enjoyed the read! ~FjR~
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7/23/2025 6:34:51 AM # 1.0.0
A commendable slice of prosaic verse, young lady......If you don't mind an ounce of constructive suggestion, watch your choice of punctuation...The employment of effective punctuation is so much more paramount when writing in a prosaic style as opposed to contemporary free-verse whose break-points are easily defined by stanzaic structure. In prose, it's like reading a book...The reader must know when you want them to pause, and be able to identify the end of a thought.Prose is not as easy as it may appear! t In your above work, there are breakpoints which are not recognized by IE: comma, colon, ellipsis or ellision. That said...keep that pen pumping..I enjoyed the read! ~FjR~