Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Life Of Illusion Comments

Rating: 4.7

The rose prides itself upon beauty
Unaware of the thorns
The eagle spreads its wings
Unaware of the storm
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Nosheen Irfan
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 December 2022

Really Lovelt Kudos and Top Marks

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Anjandev Roy 24 December 2022

This is incredibly brilliant......thank u....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2022

This is a good platform to fine-tune your skills. I believe you will grow leaps and bounds. Your invaluable poetry will be immortal. Write a very good poem atleast in a week. Best of luck! Merry Chritmas to you!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2022

I appreciate the first two prudent lines. Spend your time in your institution, in family, for your academic assignments, lesson plans, and with kids but make a point to find at least one hour for poetry. A great poet believes in meticulous planning, sincerity, dedication and perseverance (cont...)

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Muhammad Ali 24 July 2016

I think it is a poem of mood! ! Like an abstract piece of art, or may be I am wrong... ... what if the love of spring can survive up to another spring!

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So simple yes so profound. Well done my friend!

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Akhtar Jawad 04 January 2016

How foolish is the love That is born in spring But we cannot ignore its charms.

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Nosheen Irfan 09 January 2016

No doubt. Its charms are undeniable.

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