Thursday, November 12, 2015

Life Of A Street Dog Comments

Rating: 5.0

Born on one of the streets of an urban city
Grown under the protection of my mothers’ care
Learned the tricks to survive on the busy roads
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 06 June 2023

Outstanding poem, Asim. How well you used a dog to show the mirror to the society. Powerful poem.

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T Rajan Evol 13 November 2015

Exceptional piece...........10+

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Valsa George 12 November 2015

The contradictions of life watched from the perspective of a street dog! Often we cannot find justice in many of the acts done under the cover of charity. I feel that plundering others wealth whether to feed the poor or to plume the rich is not justifiable! You have pictured the street life in an impressive way!

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Akhtar Jawad 12 November 2015

An amazing and wonderful poem reflects poet's microscopic observation.

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Sanjukta Nag 12 November 2015

Very heart touching I must say. And you are such a brilliant observer of life with a gifted poetic mind. Beyond rating.

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Loke Kok Yee 12 November 2015

rich or poor all find happiness in their own way thanks Asim-10

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 November 2015

Man street dogs are smarter than those live in villa, intelligent writing. Great imagery and nice expression. Toyo.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2015

Life of a street dog is very amazingly painted in the art of expressive words. Wise and having a wonderful vision on Dog's life who move here and there. Very marvelous work shared really....10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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