Wednesday, November 15, 2017

Life Of A Bum Comments

Rating: 3.0

morning light a new day has begun in the life of a bum
he stammers in the curb as if a lonely bird
goes to the soup kitchen at dawn
closed off from society as if a mystery you see
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John Ackerman
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George Krokos 15 November 2017

Some grammatical issues need to be rectified in the poem, otherwise a good read. It has been written, I dare say, from some personal experience which even I can relate to.

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