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Life- Nothing But A Bubble Burst Comments

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Although he is free, yet lives as a prisoner,
Although he is a king, yet lives as a mystic (fakir) .

Behold the level of his belief in Almighty God,
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M. Asim Nehal
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 23 January 2023

nice to read the introspective poem about life; thanks for sharing

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Aarzoo Mehek 22 January 2023

My kind of poem. A life well lived is a gift from God. Fighting the nafs is the biggest battle one encounters in lifetime. Beautiful poem Asim.

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Suzon Albert 22 January 2023

Amusing poem with great substance, I quote: Behold the level of his belief in Almighty God, He lives the life of riches in the house of sands.

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Deepak S S 22 January 2023

Great philosophical touch in your poem: The enemy of my life flows into the veins, And count my breath by sitting inside my heart.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 22 January 2023

Yes life is no more than that, we live on the edges and death takes everything away,

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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