Friday, May 10, 2019

Life Not Perfect Any More Comments

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those days of childhood were perfect!
lived in a quaint little house, cradled among an exquisitely colourful landscape, where the breeze carried a tranquil lemon scent, and cooing birds serenade to a strangely mythical land.
a delightful swing - swinging away innumerable times…evoked passionate emotions of love and tenderness,
lots of playful frolic and exuberant laughter,
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 May 2019

THIS IS A VERY NICE DAWN POETRY ON MY SECOND READ BUT MY DAWN WAS SHE SO LOVELY AND AS U SAY PERFECTLY DO READ MY DAWN BECKONS THEE

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 May 2019

NO MANS LIFE CAN EVER BE PERFECT THE RATIONALE CHANGES EVERY MOMENT JUST RELAX ALL HUMAN LIVES ARE LIKE THAT URS AND MINE 22222222222222222

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Yes, You are right, no one's life is perfect. Thank you.

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